i am in the proces of writing a story of an unknown spartan hero and am thinking of posting it on these forums so if i do plz dont point out my obvius story line flaws i did it for a reason to make the story more interesting but still i think i did a good job of keeping on the story line

Sounds good dude.

heres my first story.
http://halofanforum.myfastforum.org/vie ... 23&start=0
heres one of the hff one's
http://halofanforum.myfastforum.org/vie ... 73&start=0

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